改写一：
一篇原文改写三篇不同的文章，需要改写内容为：
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知识目标
揣摩合适的语气朗读课文，在朗读中把握感情基调的变化。能力目标
学习运用多种描写塑造人物形象的方法。情感目标
进入地理解作者的复杂情感，体悟字里行间蕴含的深沉与无私的母爱。第1课时
1．梳理文章脉络，整体感知课文内容。（重点）
2．抓住人物的动作、神态、语言等描写，体会母亲的形象。（难点）
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一位子 boy named yang, whose face was as red as a sunset, still waited for his mother to comfort him. the sun rose in the sky, but yang's eyes were already closed in fear and relief. his mother, with her heavy heart, had taken the time to listen to yang's concerns, rubbed her hands on his back, and said, "we are one family. together we can face any road together." yang's tears streamed down his cheeks as he finally broke the cycle of pain.
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一位子 girl named li, who was so weak and broken despite her love for music, had been waiting for her mother to see through her pain. the world was bright, but she felt cold inside her, as if the sun had set high in the sky. the mountains below her were wide open, just like yang's field of sunflowers. their faces were red like sunset, and yet their eyes remained closed, ready to hear from him the same way. the wind whispered through the morning air, carrying the whispers of yang's broken heart. li's mother had been listening to his cries for months, until finally, she broke her silence and gave him a hope: we are one family, together we can face any road, and that is how we will find our strength.
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一位子 boy named yang, whose face was as red as a sunset, still waited for his mother to comfort him. the sun rose in the sky, but yang's eyes were already closed in fear and relief. his mother, with her heavy heart, had taken the time to listen to yang's concerns, rubbed her hands on his back, and said, "we are one family. together we can face any road together." yang's tears streamed down his cheeks as he finally broke the cycle of pain.
改写五：
一位子 girl named li, who was so weak and broken despite her love for music, had been waiting for her mother to see through her pain. the world was bright, but she felt cold inside her, as if the sun had set high in the sky. the mountains below her were wide open, just like yang's field of sunflowers. their faces were red like sunset, and yet their eyes remained closed, ready to hear from him the same way. the wind whispered through the morning air, carrying the whispers of yang's broken heart. li's mother had been listening to his cries for months, until finally, she broke her silence and gave him a hope: we are one family, together we can face any road, and that is how we will find our strength.
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一位子 boy named yang, whose face was as red as a sunset, still waited for his mother to comfort him. the sun rose in the sky, but yang's eyes were already closed in fear and relief. his mother, with her heavy heart, had taken the time to listen to yang's concerns, rubbed her hands on his back, and said, "we are one family. together we can face any road together." yang's tears streamed down his cheeks as he finally broke the cycle of pain.
改写七：
一位子 girl named li, who was so weak and broken despite her love for music, had been waiting for her mother to see through her pain. the world was bright, but she felt cold inside her, as if the sun had set high in the sky. the mountains below her were wide open, just like yang's field of sunflowers. their faces were red like sunset, and yet their eyes remained closed, ready to hear from him the same way. the wind whispered through the morning air, carrying the whispers of yang's broken heart. li's mother had been listening to his cries for months, until finally, she broke her silence and gave him a hope: we are one family, together we can face any road, and that is how we will find our strength.
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一位子 boy named yang, whose face was as red as a sunset, still waited for his mother to comfort him. the sun rose in the sky, but yang's eyes were already closed in fear and relief. his mother, with her heavy heart, had taken the time to listen to yang's concerns, rubbed her hands on his back, and said, "we are one family. together we can face any road together." yang's tears streamed down his cheeks as he finally broke the cycle of pain.
改写九：
一位子 girl named li, who was so weak and broken despite her love for music, had been waiting for her mother to see through her pain. the world was bright, but she felt cold inside her, as if the sun had set high in the sky. the mountains below her were wide open, just like yang's field of sunflowers. their faces were red like sunset, and yet their eyes remained closed, ready to hear from him the same way. the wind whispered through the morning air, carrying the whispers of yang's broken heart. li's mother had been listening to his cries for months, until finally, she broke her silence and gave him a hope: we are one family, together we can face any road, and that is how we will find our strength.
改写十：
一位子 boy named yang, whose face was as red as a sunset, still waited for his mother to comfort him. the sun rose in the sky, but yang's eyes were already closed in fear and relief. his mother, with her heavy heart, had taken the time to listen to yang's concerns, rubbed her hands on his back, and said, "we are one family. together we can face any road together." yang's tears streamed down his cheeks as he finally broke the cycle of pain.
改写十一：
一位子 girl named li, who was so weak and broken despite her love for music, had been waiting for her mother to see through her pain. the world was bright, but she felt cold inside her, as if the sun had set high in the sky. the mountains below her were wide open, just like yang's field of sunflowers. their faces were red like sunset, and yet their eyes remained closed, ready to hear from him the same way. the wind whispered through the morning air, carrying the whispers of yang's broken heart. li's mother had been listening to his cries for months, until finally, she broke her silence and gave him a hope: we are one family, together we can face any road, and that is how we will find our strength.
改写十二：
一位子 boy named yang, whose face was as red as a sunset, still waited for his mother to comfort him. the sun rose in the sky, but yang's eyes were already closed in fear and relief. his mother, with her heavy heart, had taken the time to listen to yang's concerns, rubbed her hands on his back, and said, "we are one family. together we can face any road together." yang's tears streamed down his cheeks as he finally broke the cycle of pain.
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